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oh man what a perfect distraction and excellent way to flush out some prewriting. It is like precum only it is words. Am I allowed any narrative? Fuck it any narrative should be spoken by a humanoid hammer named Yark.
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- Don't forget the eggs today
! We already have eggs. We have a lot of eggs.
- Don't forget the eggs today
! I won't
<break>
! Did you see that?
- No, what happened?
! He just broke the record. One hundred nine yard kick return.
- I missed it.
! YES!
- I missed it. Will you tell me the rules again?
! YES!
- What's happening now?
- Why did the announcer say that?
! YES!
<break>
= Don't do it man
+ (staring straight ahead, long strides)
= Man don't, c'mon (winces, stops walking recoils with arm gestures)
+ (walks fast down a sidewalk, pedestrians glance and part)
= (catching up at brisk trot) She's not worth granite man. She's not worth granite.
+ Granite...
= Just scare him just scare him get yr head right man, what about next month?
+ Next month is next month. No change.
= There will be a change. There will be a FUCK of a change.
+ She's worth ...
= Granite! Listen to me.
+ I'm through. (lets ball hammer slide into hand from sleeve)
= Don't (reaches for coat, grips shoulder and is thrown jostled back)
+ I'm gonna.
+ (kicking at a random pedestrian's knee and walking faster)
& (from background) HEY!
+ I shoulda been a craftsman
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maybe more later
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